Which email do you like more?

I am writing an email for our Summer marketing push, and I need your help! Below you will find two different email templates I have written. The email is going to Principals and Guidance Counselors asking them to promote our Summer courses.

I don't know if you saw my post about how to write effective emails, but if you missed it, you can check it out HERE.

Can you tell me in the comments which email you think is better? Thanks!

Email 1:

I don’t know how you feel about the school year ending, but I am excited to finish the school year strong, so I can get a break, spend some time with family, and get my toes in some warm sand.

Before we break, I am spreading the word about TorchPrep’s Summer Intensive Program. It is the perfect way for students to end the year right, with a higher ACT score!

These courses are extremely popular. Spots are limited, and the courses sell out every year. Attached you will find our Email/Newsletter and Flyer.

Can you please pass this along to your parents and students?

Let’s finish strong with more score increases! Thanks for all your help.

Email 2:

TorchPrep’s Summer Intensive Program is here!

The last day of school is right around the corner, and before we break out the flip-flops and sunblock, let’s give students get one last chance to achieve a higher ACT score.

Attached you will find our Email/Newsletter and Flyer. Can you please pass this along to your parents and students?

These courses are extremely popular. Spots are limited, and the courses sell out every year.

Let’s finish strong with more score increases! Thanks for all your help.